Monday, January 30th 2006 - [512]Sofia (1 of 12)
Brisbane
Moving in
Sofia
time lapse

Original Commentary

Yes, we skipped forward a month. While the missing month would be great material for a bonus book, it contains a lot of subtle variations on a theme. And a month's worth of subtle variations on a theme would be a bad idea for the pacing of the comic right now. That and if they went on dates, it'd be too easy to put them on wacky dates, and that'd be venturing a bit too far into sitcom territory.

When I was lettering this, I was thinking of changing Sofia's line in the second panel to "what if she's not comfortable with a man who's assertive", but that implied "a man" more than it implied Brisbane - Terrence

Modern Commentary
We skipped forward a month because folks were clamoring for Brisbane and Kimberly to get back together.

As much as we'd like a month of cautious dating and getting comfortable with each other again, that could have taken a year's worth of comics. And, well,folks were clamoring. - Terrence

Tuesday, January 31st 2006 - [513]Sofia (2 of 12)
Joke
Shock
Since Unlike Minerva
Brisbane
Sofia
sense of humor

Original Commentary

If Brisbane had a sense of humor before, his vaudeville act was no indication of it! Isabel and I had a discussion about whether this was sarcasm or not. It's mild sarcasm - Terrence

Modern Commentary
This is the surest sign that Brisbane has changed. He almost tells a joke! - Terrence

Wednesday, February 1st 2006 - [514]Sofia (3 of 12)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Sofia
annoyed
kiss

Original Commentary

Speaking of blonde and sassy....- Terrence

This was more for the audience than for the characters, really. Because Brisbane and Kimberly have see each other quite a bit over the last month. And if anything, she's doing this for Sofia's "benefit" - Isabel

Modern Commentary
So, my commentary there is a reference to the day's Namir Deiter comic.

We do that sometimes. The commentary was all together so sometimes we reference the day's ND or Spare Parts if we have something to say. - Terrence

Friday, February 3rd 2006 - [515]Sofia (4 of 12)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Sofia
Sass
Point to Sofia

Original Commentary

Originally, Sofia's line was "I'm not your boyfriend, I can support myself". It didn't quite ring true. We both came up with the exact same phrase at the exact same time - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Sofia has so much unwarranted confidence. We'll see how long it lasts.

Since Brisbane left suddenly, he didn't take much with him. He doesn't have a lot of stuff and he didn't have the courage to go back and get what he left behind.

He's lucky Kimberly didn't just throw it out, honestly. - Terrence

 
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