Original Commentary
A new day, a new hairstyle. Personally, I don't know how she can stand to wear it down like that, even in the Fall- being on an island and all, I'm sure things can be a bit humid- but, then, it also snows in some parts of said island, so you can't take much for granted. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Yeah, selling commercial real estate involves paperwork, and trying to figure out what you need to learn in order to sell a building (and not get completely ripped off) is a step too far. - Terrence

Original Commentary
Terrence wasn't too sure he liked the role reversal here, with Brisbane thinking of the quick money making scheme with Kimberly not taking him seriously. I told him not to worry, Kimberly is too busy doing everything else to come up with the ideas (I'm sure she would have already come up with one on one of her better weeks). -Isabel

Modern Commentary
It's a flawed idea, but not a ridiculous one. - Terrence

Original Commentary
In the original script, the door was supposed to be only slightly open. But... um... see, that file only has two layers, one with the door open and one with it closed- but none without the door at all. So the door is either completely opened or closed. Perhaps it needs a brick or something to keep it from swinging open and hurting people... or perhaps I'm just stupid about flattening layers... or both. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
This would have been a good time to cut away for a comic or two instead. The way I staged it, it looks like he just vanished, instead of him stepping away because he and Kimberly are trying to do everything everywhere. - Terrence