Original Commentary
In the first draft of this, the panel went a lot worse and Kimberly felt a lot worse about it. It wasn't until I started to draw on it did I realize just how painful that was to me personally. And while Terrence said he didn't base on it our experiences, it hurt all the same (don't try and rationalize with someone who's out of it, really). And, really, Kimberly is a fast thinking, fast talking person who thinks on her feet- it makes sense for her to turn a bad situation to her favor. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
And Kimberly is going to Kimberly. I fear I may be recapping Kimberly's old business a bit too much, but I worry that folks will miss context otherwise.

She's not ashamed of it, but it's a bit small-time and doesn't give her a lot of useful insight into how things are now - Terrence

Original Commentary
I had intended to have used Namir Deiter's old High School gym background for the concession/break area, but it just looked too... high schoolish. So it got dumped.

Terrence had originally mentioned Richard throwing a chair at Sinclair (and intentionally missed him), but he didn't like how it read and as such changed it. Personally I liked it (in fact, I had suggested that they walked past it and a chair being thrown barely misses Brisbane), but as it's his arc, Terrence has ultimate veto power. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Who's Billy Donald? Just some guy. The Minerva Theatre had a lot of performers who didn't show up in the comic and he's one of them. Good at singing and smart enough not to get caught up in Brisbane's drama - Terrence