Monday, November 10th 2008 - [1316]What Happened? (1 of 5)
Brisbane
Robert
worry

Original Commentary
So, what happened during the rest of the day Miz Taylor returned? We now know that Jane had to go home... yeah, I'm sure this was an easy one to guess, but we both felt we needed to tie together some of the smaller loose ends from the previous arc. Since it was so tied into the previous arc, Terrence had to write this arc as well. Which was why this set of comics were so late. In fact, in their first run, the entire week was posted in one day. So we did an entire story arc in one day. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I'm glad this one has a short separate epilogue. Sometimes, we focus on the post-action for a bit. On one hand, folks say "in late, out early" for choosing what bits to include in a scene. On the other hand, the emotional impact is what this comic is about and it makes sense to have them discuss things. - Terrence

 
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