Friday, November 7th 2008 - [1315]The Troublesome Trouble of Kimberly Taylor-Adams (80 of 80)
Brisbane
Kimberly
Ms. Taylor
Angry
Presentation

Original Commentary
...you probably couldn't tell that Brisbane was turning on the lights again... either that, or he's just using a clicking device for his own amusement and our own confusion. Either way, mostly.

I'm sure Terrence will have more commentary about this comic once he gets the chance to write it, so check back in on it in a few days... but this has been quite an arc. At 80 comics, it is the longest story arc either of us have done, ever. Quite a bit has happened in this arc, with many still on going story lines and questions to be answered. Terrence wrote this entire arc, save maybe a filler week I may have done, I forget honestly. He did a wonderful job and I for one am quite proud of him. But if he ever does a huge arc again without writing the ending which results in putting my production comic on hold, I'm going to go nuts. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Isabel might not have written much of the comic, but she helped me craft lines and steered me away from any number of bad ideas when I was writing this. You have to go through the bad ideas to get to the good ones sometimes.

The most important thing about this ending is that it redirects Ms. Taylor's anger. Because one thing this storyline made clear is that there will eventually be a showdown between Kimberly and her mother, and one of them will no longer work here when that is over, and that would almost certainly be where the comic ends - Terrence

 
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