Monday, March 30th 2009 - [1450]Minervacon (15 of 49)
Brisbane
Kimberly
Bed

Original Commentary
I have to admit, I drew the comic out before having a script. Terrence gave me a line he wanted to be used in the Sunday, but as I decided to save it for the next day, not sure how long this conversation would last. Unfortunately, that line didn't make it to today's comic, but that just means I can save it for another day.

I had talked to Terrence about which one of the two were funnier, he said Brisbane, when she isn't trying. Kimberly, when she is. He also said Kimberly is the straight man type, but usually gets all the good lines. I have to agree- I had it written that way as well, but was willing (and could easily) flip the script if needed. Although it does feel more natural this way- Kimberly is more of a smart ass. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I mean, comedy wrestling is a thing. Wrestling is inherently ridiculous and there's nothing wrong with playing into it.

This is one of my favorite kind of comics, where we talk about who the characters are and how they'd react to something. Admittedly, it only works if you already know who's who and what they're like, but if it works it works - Terrence

 
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