Sunday, March 29th 2009 - [1449]Minervacon (14 of 49)
Brisbane
Kimberly
Ticket
Bed

Original Commentary
Terrence hasn't been feeling too great over the past few days which has caused him some difficulty when writing. He wanted to have more comic time between the big reveal to Brisbane to the actual event, so I'm going to do a bit of filler to give him time and to give Brisbane and Kimberly some screen time together just talking to each other. It's been a bit since we've seen them together without something falling apart. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I hate it when the mid-comic joke is better than the actual punchline. I like the plot that the comic covers but I wish I had put a bit more into the fourth panel.

But it gets Brisbane and Kimberly back to their usual state - Terrence

 
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