Friday, March 13th 2009 - [1433]Almost apartment revisions (5 of 7)
Original Commentary
Kimberly's last line had a lot of changes. Isabel wrote it as "I don't want Dan seeing any pictures of me in a bikini." .
I changed it to "I don't want our guests seeing any pictures of me in a bikini.", because I didn't want to confuse people if they didn't know who Dan was. Isabel pointed out that it loses the awesome visual of Dan seeing Kimberly's bikini poster, and I had to agree. So we compromised - Terrence
Modern Commentary
I mean, what posters would Brisbane put up? Probably something for movies he likes or Final Battle Adventure Online.
Or whatever's on sale and isn't too embarassing. Like autumn landscapes or pictures of old mills or something
- Terrence