Original Commentary
Originally, I had tried to write a version of this sequence where Ms. Taylor lost her temper. She didn't. In fact, she completely dominated the conversation and bested Brisbane and Kimberly. That got scrapped because she had done that about a week ago, and Kimberly was charging in with a full head of steam. If Kimberly didn't come back aggressively, there'd be no point to her coming back at all. That said, Ms. Taylor's first line was originally from that version; I think that was all I kept - Terrence

Modern Commentary
I wish I had kept the original drafts of the script, but also I wish I had tightened up Kimberly's line in the last panel. - Terrence