Thursday, October 2nd 2008 - [1281]The Troublesome Trouble of Kimberly Taylor-Adams (46 of 80)
Damn pens
Brisbane
Kimberly
Meeting
Worry
Panic
High Quality Pen

Original Commentary
Can you tell she's trying to crush a pen from the visuals? probably not... I still can't fully envision someone crushing a pen. But, it works thanks to her dialog. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I like the idea of Kimberly grabbing the Robertson Pen from her desk, trying to snap it out of frustration, and failing. That's rather a lot for two panels, though. I wish I had thought more about how long it would take to convey that action.

The script called for a customer service smile in panel 1, but there's no point to it. Nobody here is happy with this; why pretend? - Terrence

 
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