Saturday, April 26th 2008 - [1140] Coming home (13 of 14)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Professor Amazing
Sex
Love

Original Commentary

Terrence and I had a little argument about the last few comics, I had no idea where it was going, and where they actually were when these were all taken place (Terrence claims I always do a good job without them, but sometimes, as in this case, I had no idea what he was thinking).

In yesterday's comic, Terrence originally wanted Kimberly to be wearing a scarf and sun glasses when mentioning her alter-ego. However, it makes no sense to have this happen when they are sitting in the middle of the kitchen writing thank you letters (unless Kimberly is in fact really disorganized and keeps her accessories by the Tupperware). We had a little chat about this, and the sun glasses and scarf were nixed. I however, decided to add a bit of unscripted foreplay in panel three, for, as I told Terrence, "There really is only one way I personally can see where this conversation was going". And, well, now you all know too. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
I can only assume that there was some alter-ego-related hanky-panky going on between this comic and the last, because even Brisbane is smart enough to know that his vaudeville-related pseudonyms will stop him from getting laid.

But also, that first panel? I'm sure Isabel said something like "I like the comics, but wouldn't they have figured this out before the wedding?" and I had to justify this at least a little. - Terrence

 
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