Original Commentary

This is draft three of the comic. Upon further reflection, Brisbane and Robert aren't a good combination. They're very similar characters and don't really play off each other well. Robert's lines all got edited down significantly; there was too much unnecessary information in there.

Modern Commentary
Brisbane is really trying here. He's giving a lot more here than he's getting.

Did Jane show up the next week? She probably did. Robert is too afraid and projecting his own fear onto everyone else.- Terrence