Sunday, July 10th 2005 - [345]Coffee Break (6 of 17)
Brisbane
Robert
Boxes
computers

Original Commentary

Did you ever have one of those weeks where one thing after another seems to physically break down inside of you- sometimes even before the last one got better and by the time everything is mostly fixed you're stuck in a deep, deep funk that not even Maple Story can fix? Well, that was my week last week. I now have a ton of backed up work to do, which isn't helping my will to work. So, today I asked Terrence to write a one panel comic, in the hopes of trying to get ahead tonight- which unfortunately didn't happen because it's 2:30 in the morning on Sunday as I'm writing this.

Oh, you want some commentary about the actual comic and not my failing body? Well, ok. Today I asked Terrence just how much he is going to reveal about what happened between Robert and Jane- all he said is that there's going to be a flash back that will go into it... so now you all know as much about what he did as I do. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
If I've got a storyline in progress and I can't or won't explain it to Isabel, that's never a good sign. I don't usually have the whole thing planned out when it starts - especially for longer stories - but if all I've got is "Here's how it begins and trust me, it's going to be awesome", then it's usually not ready to go.

I ought to have the whole thing written before it starts, or at least outlined. It's not uncommon for stories to leave the outline as I write them, but if all I've got at the beginning is a one-sentence pitch, unconnected scenes, and loose feelings, then I probably ought to take another week and get my thoughts together.- Terrence

 
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