Original Commentary

I ended up adding panel 4 last minute (as some of you may notice, most all the YSIF Sundays are four panels). I just felt a little extra space and time was needed in there, to show Dr. Paul milling over what he should do in his head. The original still has four panels, and the final panel four is in a new unarmed sketch book (the Tori sketch book is missing and the Jun book is virtually done- I do have another one also with a nice canvas cover which has been dubbed the "Isaac" book, but does not bear his picture)- Isabel

Modern Commentary
If Brent is feeling grumpy, can you tell? - Terrence