Sunday, February 8th 2009 - [1400]Redecorating (7 of 14)
Dan
Brisbane
Panic
Dinner

Original Commentary

I made a small mistake with this comic and the script- I had forgotten there was one more segment of Dan and Brisbane talking, so I was going to have Dan walking away in panel four. Unfortunately I didn't notice this until I was lettering it. I get extra stupid points on this because I was the one who wrote this arc.

However, looking at it now, you can only really tell he's walking away because I'm telling you... which means my failure was a success... I suppose. :|

Also, Brisbane had to be moved down in most of the panels... there are not too many people who are taller than him, but they are there and when they show up, it can be annoying- especially if I forget they are actually taller than him! -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Brisbane doesn't have a problem with Dan and Lola joining them on a double date. But hosting people at their apartment is a step too far. We're kinda the same way. We're not really configured for guests. - Terrence

 
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