Original Commentary

Is this the Brisbane/Jane comic? Technically. But the waitress/customer role heavily limits their interaction. Both Jane and Sofia are a lot more alive outside of their jobs - it's a personality trait they share. They're also both complex characters and no matter what I do with them I'd leave a lot out. I'm glad I was able to get Jane's coffeemancy into this arc, though. Isabel helped me a lot with the punchline on this one - Terrence

Modern Commentary
I don't have anything to say about this one. I mean, it fits the "rules" for this storyline but Jane and Brisbane didn't really interact much. They were civil to each other, I'm sure but I don't think they had memorable scenes together.

And Jane being at work limits what does. She's a lot more herself when she's not just taking orders. - Terrence