Thursday, November 23rd 2006 - [731]Party Line (4 of 6)
Robert
Jane
Party

Original Commentary

No, most retail workers don't hate everyone. They just don't care. Robert, however, has a keenly developed sense of shame and can feel absolutely mortified over an offhand comment he makes. Even he knows nobody else remembered him say it...or even heard him in the first place - Terrence

Modern Commentary
My notes for this week were Jane -restless, dislikes her job, trying to be normal Robert - painfully shy, afraid of saying the wrong thing.

I mean, it all got checked off. But still, there's no stakes. Some storylines are here for the drama. Some storylines are here for the humor. This one is mostly here for texture. - Terrence

 
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