Monday, November 20th 2006 - [728]Party Line (1 of 6)
Jane
Robert
Party

Original Commentary

Jane is a lot more complex than I've shown and is #1 on my list of characters I want to do more with. Mind you, there are others who outrank her on the list of characters I feel I should do more with. Like David. At the moment, she only really interacts with Robert, Jake, and Sofia. Jake and Sofia-at-work are fairly limited and Jane is, almost unfortunately for her, a good listener - Terrence

Modern Commentary
Regarding the original commentary, one of my rules has been "No work means no work". If I don't have anything for a character, they don't show up. That's why David isn't around much.

On one hand, you find out how characters move by moving them. On the other hand, if I didn't have anything for Jane, then that's not a great place to work from - Terrence

 
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