 Friday, May 26th 2006 - [600]Lunch plans (5 of 6)
Original Commentary
Yes, one course per comic. Since this is a six-comic arc, that means tomorrow is dessert. I hope I didn't give too much away there. I'm aiming for the same kind of buildup. We had the beginning and the pre-emptive questioning earlier and now we have, well, as direct as things are going to get. Let's face it, neither of these girls are going to ask directly. I was originally planning on building a bit more dramatic tension and end each comic with a line indicating that Emily was just about to turn on Sofia. But when I tried to actually write that, I realized that Emily doesn't have any hold over Sofia, like that. I would've liked to do that, but it wouldn't work. But to answer the pressing question: Are they? No, of course not. But, you know, free dinner - Terrence
Modern Commentary
Sofia is crafty and Emily is going to be buying her a lot of food- Terrence
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