Thursday, March 2nd 2006 - [527]Relationships: part one(1 of 3)
David
Cindy
College
More Blue Hair

Original Commentary

I had planned on doing an arc involving Robert and Jane. Writing took a bit of a while. Isabel suggested the basic outline for this arc and I wrote it.

In the script, Cindy thought "He remembers me" in the first panel, but it got cut because of space. It struck me as a bit much so I didn't work too hard to find a way to put it back in.- Terrence

The background in this comic is put together from a few other files. The window in the background is taken from the Lemon Technology exterior. The walls were based on the Martini Tuesday exterior and enhanced a bit to look more brick-like - Isabel

Modern Commentary
Relationships! The idea of this storyline is to reintroduce the characters. We've done this a few times.

If we were clever, we would've made sure this would be during the beginning of a book.

We were not clever in this regard. I don't think this made it into any of the books; after book 3, sales didn't justify it unfortunately.- Terrence

 
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