 Thursday, July 21st 2005 - [355]Coffee Break (16 of 18)
Original Commentary
Once again, Terrence and myself talked well into the night trying to work today's comic out. Originally there was going to be a panel where Jane and the other girl working the cafe were talking, where she was mentioning Brisbane was there to talk to her and she wanted a portion of the tip Brisbane gave because she went to get Jane.
Terrence was adamant about having Brisbane be the one who tells Jane NOT to bring up the whole "thing that broke up Robert and Jane", where I wanted Jane to say she didn't really care about what the thing was. Both brought out different qualities in the characters, but in the end it was decided that Brisbane should get the line.- Isabel
Modern Commentary
Ok, Brisbane is actually pretty good at this. Dude is a good friend and much better than Robert deserves.
Sitting around, feeling sorry for yourself, and hoping your problems go away can actually work. At least if you've got a friend who's working hard to handle things for you.
Perhaps I'm being too hard on Robert. We all need a hand sometimes. Nobody lives entirely by themselves. Still, taking action is more likely to get you results than not. - Terrence
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