Tuesday, May 10th 2005 - [293]A Picnic in the Park (8 of 23)
Kimberly
Emily
Lounge Guys
Hollow Legs

Original Commentary

In the original script Terrence had Jake coming in asking the three lounge guys if there were any more burgers. I looked at him and said, "It's 11 at night and you want me to draw how many characters?!". So, we made a few alterations to the script and had Lounge Guy #3 ask about more burgers- which truth be told works out a lot better (and shows just how greedy these guys can be about their food). -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Yeah, not much planning on my part. I just figured that I could throw everybody together and hilarity would ensue. I mean, the Lounge Guys are annoying by accident except when they're annoying on purpose. But I'm not quite sure you could look at this and say that eating all the hamburgers at a picnic is such a Lounge Guy thing to do.

But I like that first panel. Kimberly is up to something and clearly enjoying this more than she would usually enjoy a picnic with Emily.- Terrence

 
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