Tuesday, June 23rd 2009 - [1535]One Morning (2 of 7)
Original Commentary
You can always tell when Terrence is the one who picks the character's outfit colors... he tends to go for a more daring look while I tend to go with safer colors. But I figure what the hey, it is his arc after all. Terrence had originally had Brisbane's words from this comic's panel one be his line in panel three of yesterday's, but I had drawn them with the old "didn't really get it" look on Brisbane's face in yesterday's. It wouldn't have looked as good. Fortunately I was able to convince Terrence to keep the line as it was, and all is right in the world... kind of. -Isabel
Modern Commentary
Sometimes, when you look at your old work you see things you wish you had done differently. Maybe a joke could've been told a little better. Maybe an emotional moment could be made a bit more prominent. A punchline could've used a little more punch.
This one, I thought I was being really clever. Looking back on it, I have no justification for that.
- Terrence