Tuesday, June 23rd 2009 - [1535]One Morning (2 of 7)
Kimberly
Robe
Newspaper
Brisbane
Galactus Is Invading And Akuma Has Destroyed Half The Planet

Original Commentary
You can always tell when Terrence is the one who picks the character's outfit colors... he tends to go for a more daring look while I tend to go with safer colors. But I figure what the hey, it is his arc after all. Terrence had originally had Brisbane's words from this comic's panel one be his line in panel three of yesterday's, but I had drawn them with the old "didn't really get it" look on Brisbane's face in yesterday's. It wouldn't have looked as good. Fortunately I was able to convince Terrence to keep the line as it was, and all is right in the world... kind of. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Sometimes, when you look at your old work you see things you wish you had done differently. Maybe a joke could've been told a little better. Maybe an emotional moment could be made a bit more prominent. A punchline could've used a little more punch.

This one, I thought I was being really clever. Looking back on it, I have no justification for that. - Terrence

 
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