Friday, February 22nd 2008 - [1082] The night before the wedding (5 of 12)
Jane
Robert
Bachelorette Party

Original Commentary

Well, Jane expects that she'll keep Sofia company in the car, I think. Anyhow, rowdies is a good word, and describes the kind of people Jane hung out with back in high school and college very well- Terrence

Modern Commentary
I wish we had either done more or less with Jane's past. Either give it a full-on flashback storyline or just not mentioning it. We don't have time to explain everything about everybody, but I feel like I was laying down a foundation with no plans to actually construct anything there - Terrence

 
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