Friday, July 13th 2007 - [903]Kimberly's loss (5 of 6)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Lost
Voice
Sick
Laryngitis
Hug
d'aww

Original Commentary

Originally, I was going to have the comic set up where Brisbane was running to Robert for help. Then I decided that it was better if he tried to do it himself. I'm sure the day was very trying for Kimberly - it's difficult not to be able to speak, even if there's nobody to talk to. At least she got to ignore Emily's call. That probably felt pretty good I'm sure she always ignores Emily's calls and it feels good every time - Isabel

Modern Commentary
In the script, Kimberly was a bit more visibly sick. She's not feeling great here, I'm sure, but you can't see how red her nose is.

Brisbane probably overdid it with the medical supplies but he's a nurturer that way - Terrence

 
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