Tuesday, March 20th 2007 - [819]Lola's secret (8 of 12)
Brisbane
Kimberly
Hug
Wounded Pride

Original Commentary

Terrence was very specific with this comic's actions, which I am thankful for... when he writes, chances are he won't give them, which can sometimes be a problem. But, because he did... I feel I did almost exactly what he was looking for, or a close version of it, anyway. -Isabel

Modern Commentary
Brisbane feels comfortable being vulnerable around Kimberly and she's able to help him feel better. He's opened up to her before, but it's still nice to see them being emotionally open - Terrence

 
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