Monday, June 5th 2006 - [607]On pins and needles (6 of 6)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Stress Relief

Original Commentary

Like the above comic, this wasn't originally going to be a Monday comic. The Namir Deiter was intended to run on Saturday and this was a Sunday comic that got cut down. We didn't make the donation goal for the full schedule, so things got moved around a bit. Anyhow, I'm sure this is based in part on my reaction to some of Isabel's projects - Terrence

Modern Commentary
The smart thing to do would have been for May's donations to determine the schedule for June 16-July 15, then have June's donations cover July 16 through August 15, and so on. That way we wouldn't have the last-minute emergency rewrites.

I mean, it was exciting to have things maybe come down to the wire. But also, stressful. - Terrence

Wednesday, June 7th 2006 - [608]Epilogue (1 of 1)
Kimberly
Brisbane
Crochet
Maternal
Angry
Violence
Weapon of Choice

Original Commentary

I was planning on doing something different in today's comic but I've been entirely unable to write these last few days. I owe Isabel a cookie for carrying over last week's arc for another day - Terrence

Modern Commentary
We're about to start on the first Business Adventure storyline. About once a year, we'd do these extended storylines centering around Lemon Technology with lots of moving parts and character lore.

They got moreso generally from here. But I have to wonder where I was in the writing process at this point. - Terrence

Friday, June 9th 2006 - [609]The troublesome trouble of Ms. Taylor (1 of 64)
Ms. Taylor
Brisbane
Fired
Miz Taylor

Original Commentary

This was intended to be a one-shot, but I'm feeling inspired. Isabel wrote this, for the most part. I rewrote the last panel. Hopefully I can get that arc written and edited before the feeling of inspiration passes. It's the kind of arc that'll require inspiration and editing - Terrence

Modern Commentary
How large is Lemon Technology? Isn't the HR department just like two or three people?

Also, Brisbane doesn't know how to fire people. There's probably paperwork involved. - Terrence

 
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