Friday, May 6th 2005 - [290]A Picnic in the Park (5 of 23)
Kimberly
Brisbane

Original Commentary

Isabel wrote this, mainly to get the comic back in the direction I intended with the previous comic. Now I to finish the plot.

Modern Commentary
So, Brisbane thought he was supposed to invite a bunch of folks then Kimberly decided to run with it.
I kinda wish we had done this a bit more deliberately, with Kimberly setting Brisbane up for this. I've got notes about doing this both ways. I don't know why we decided Kimberly wouldn't do this on purpose (per yesterday's commentary) then decided that she'd lean into this happening by accident.

But Brisbane's definition of "and friends" includes a lot more people than Kimberly's. Or Emily's, it looks like. - Terrence

 
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