Sunday, March 6th 2005 - [237]Working Girl (6 of 12)
Kimberly
Richard
Sinclair
New Character
Old character

Original Commentary

How long have Richard and Sinclair been waiting there for another employee to show up? Well, the letter was sent out at least two days ago... - Terrence

Modern Commentary
My first thought is that I wish we had drawn out the reveal a bit more - they mention that they're working for a company that sells fragrance compounds for industrial use, and Kimberly worries about whether or not to work for a competitor to her mother's company and, eventually, Richard or Sinclair lets her know that it's not a competitor...

But then I remember that we've only mentioned what Lemon Technology does once, six months ago. Since we haven't brought it up recently or repeatedly, it's not fair to expect the audience to remember that as a plot point. - Terrence

 
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